On Monday I shared the first four sentences from my YA Fantasy Portrayer. Today I'd like to show you guys the final sentences of those chapters. Once again, I'd like to thank the gals over at Falling for Fiction for this amazing blogfest.
Without further ado, the four Hangers of my first four chapters:
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Chapter 1
The lifeless body gushing blood isn't a homeless person...it's Marc.
Chapter 2
"Oh and Nora, dear," says Voltima as she curls her hair. "Do carry just a smudge of shoe polish. You'll need it."
Chapter 3
If I don't destroy the plane my brother and sisters will die, but if do I'll end hundreds of lives.
Chapter 4
I have one minute to reach the Hospital. Or else...
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Thanks for allowing me to share.
16 comments:
Great job! They're all really good!
I want to know why Marc is still gushing blood when he's lifeless. Dead bodies don't gush blood.
Great urgency in these!
They all leave me wanting to know more! Great work.
#1 would definitely make me turn the page, but like Michael, I have some questions as to the logistics...
Excellent hangers!! Every one!
Michael: Of course I knew dead bodies don't gush blood, like, totally--pfft I 100% knew that (no I didn't). :D
Truth is, he isn't dead, she just thinks he is.
Serious cliffhangers! Oh my! Nicely done :)
You've definitely got all of the urgency in there. Great job!
Monday totally had me hooked!! Now your hangers really make me want to know more!!! Come on, you have a character named Volitma! Such great intensity.
Thanks for doing the blogfest!
Wow, gripping hangers! (No pun intended, lol) Awesome job, Tyson :)
Well done! They're awesome.
Well, a body could have just died and still be gushing blood, couldn't it? I mean, people can die instantly but the blood is still hot & not congealed and needs somewhere to go.
I'm probably wrong. ha.
Anyway, loved these too. Sounds as if your story is action-packed!
Everyone of these would keep me on the edge of my seat. Which of course is the whole point, right. Great hangers!
These are all winners. They make me want to read on. :)
The third one sounds like a horrible decision to have to make.
oh, my, that would be a real action film if it gets movie adaptation :)
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